[re] 저의 커버레터 좀 부탁드립니다….

  • #154177
    Bostonian 72.***.215.244 5061

    아래 링크로 가셔서 커버레터 포스팅하고 크리틱 받으세요. 도움될겁니다. 행운을..

    http://monster.prospero.com/n/pfx/forum.aspx?folderId=2&listMode=13&nav=messages&webtag=mstresumetips

    >하나하나 일일이 career center 가자니 담당자분들한테도 눈치보이고…
    >부탁드립니다…ㅜㅜ
    >
    >Dear Hiring Manager,
    >
    >I am completing my Master degree of architecture at OOOOO this year and heard that you are seeking to hire quality individuals for OOOO from OOOO. I would like to contact you regarding a possible full time job position and believe I can be an enthusiastic member of your firm.
    >
    >….생략
    >
    >I believe I could offer valuable services to your firm with my background in OOOO. About a half year of work experience made me more broad-minded than before. I have experience as a leading designer at OOOOO at New York, and as an design intern at OOOOO in Seoul, Korea. In addition, I won bronze and silver prize in OOOOO competition. The several professional experiences let me think environment surrounding us both in and out. Also, it pushed me to develop not only technical skills but also ability to manage team work. I’m comfortable with computer programs such as Auto cad, MAYA, Rhino, Adobe Suites and Microsoft suites. I also work well with team and have great people skills from lots of group work in OOOO.
    >
    >I look forward to hearing from you and appreciate your consideration of these materials for the position of OOOOO. For your consideration, I enclosed my resume and samples of my work. I welcome meeting with you at your convenience and can arrange to take some time most days of the week to come to your office due to our proximity. Please contact me if I can provide any further materials that would afford you an understanding of my qualifications. Thank you for your time.
    >
    >sincerely,
    >
    >ooooooooo
    >

    • nobody 66.***.19.35

      Most likely, no one reads your cover letter. Focus more on your resume.

    • …. 67.***.170.101

      저 역시 커버레터 별로 읽지 않습니다.
      딱히 찍어낼 내용이 있나…정도로만
      읽어내립니다.
      이것 저것 쓰여있는걸 보면
      차라리 없느니만 못한 커버레터도 본적 많습니다.

      예를 들자면, 현재 구인중인 자리는
      프리랜서를 부업으로 하고있는 직원을 자르고
      그 자리를 메꾸기 위한 것이라서..
      커버레터에 프리랜서를 한다는 말이 있으면
      실제 레쥬메는 보지도 않고 잘라버립니다.
      그런 커버레터는 없느니만 못한 커버레터죠.
      하지만, 이것도 회사마다 개인마다 특성이 있을테니…
      잘 준비하셔서 좋은 결과 있으시길 바랍니다.

    • 여기 198.***.242.198

      그렇군요 …감사합니다^^a